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My sister( Tom)

작성자 : fre***   ·   2014-05-22

My sister's name is Ye eun. She is 6 years old. She goes to the kinder-garden.
She is cute and active.

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My sister's name is Ye Eun.
She is 6 years old.
She goes to kindergarten.
She is cute and active.

* * * CORRECTIONS * * *

Tom: My sister's name is Ye eun.
Correct: My sister's name is Ye Eun.


Tom: She goes to the kinder-garden.
Correct: She goes to kindergarten.


* * * NOTE * * *

Good job, Tom!
You have less mistakes now.
Just keep on practicing, okay?

See you in class, Tom!


T. Melody~

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