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작성자 : san***   ·   2014-05-19

[7] After all, life is really simple; we ourselves create the circumstances that complicate it.
- People can't realize that life is simple since they are attracted by other things like material wealth or money. Therefore, they tend to make their life complicated.

[8] The tragedy of liefe is what dies inside a man while he lives.
- People usually don't care about their mind and just trace others' paths in order to became successful in the future, which makes people's life isolated and devastated.

[9] People who are afraid of death are usually afraid of life.
- People who hate to lose their possesions tend to be afraid of death. This is because they want to bring the possesions to afterlife.

[10] We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.
- Giving is the most important thing for mankind since giving makes our life fulfilling.

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>>The tragedy of liefe is what dies inside a man while he lives.
Correction: The tragedy of life is what dies inside a man while he lives.

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>> Always take note of your spelling.


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Hi Sang Hyup! Thank you for submitting your homework for today! It seems that you really understood our lesson that's why you can now already express what you can perceived on those expressions! A job well done! Keep up the good work!


~Teacher Carrie

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