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The mole game.

작성자 : joj***   ·   2014-05-16

I was going with Dyan and Unzy. Dyan show me a mole game Dyan said I can browed mole game until its monday.I'll tell you how to do a mole game.First when the mole is red you have to press that mole if you press that mele faster and faster it will turn in to one two and three. I'am so prould of my mole game and I wished I really want to have it.

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I was going with Dyan and Unzy. Dyan showed me a mole game. Dyan  said I can borrow mole game until Monday. I'll tell you how to do a mole game. First, when the mole is red you have to press that mole. If you press that mole faster and faster it will turn into one two and three. I am so proud of my mole game and I really wish to have it.  

Wanda: Dyan show me a mole game.
Correct: Dyan showed me a mole game.
Explanation: If its a past tense try to change the use of word and don't forget to put a period (.)

Wanda: Dyan said I can browed mole game until its monday.
correct: Dyan  said I can borrow mole game until Monday.
Explanation: If you will say I can it means its in present form so no need to make the word borrow into past tense also be careful with the spelling.
--Please capitalize days of the week, Months or Years also name of a person, country, place.

Wanda: I wished I really want to have it.
Correct: I really wish to have it.  
Explanation: Please study subject verb agreement.
especially word order and the proper usage of words.

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Halooooo... WANDA :)
wow! I want to borrow that Mole game too haha :D
Please be mindful about the correction XOXO


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