Today,I'll tell you about my favorite ice cream. I love chocolate, strawberry icecream. It's a chocolate ice cream with strawberry syrup.

Zenia: I love chocolate, strawberry icecream.
Correct: I love chocolate, strawberry icecream.
Explanation: No need to put comma (,) when talking about 2 flavors in one ice cream. The word "ice cream" is a compund word not combined.

Zenia: It's a chocolate ice cream with strawberry serup.
Correct: It's a chocolate ice cream with strawberry syrup.
Explanation: "Syrup" is the correct spelling of it, so be careful next time.

** Thank you so much fo making this composition, Zenia! I appreciate your it. I hope you'll have a very nice weekend. See you on Tuesday! Take care!

~ Teacher Rachelle  ~