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작성자 : mar***   ·   2014-05-09

To. T.Bernard
I went to U-Myung montain. It was not bad, because there was many kind of plants and playground. I played with my younger brother. it was very fun.
Then I go to necklace making room. And I maked Angry Pig neklace. That was good, but my brother unmaked a Olaf.
That montain wasn't difficult, because there was flat so I didn't feel hard.
The End.

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STUDENT'S HOMEWORK:

I went to U-Myung montain. It was not bad, because there was many kind of plants and playground. I played with my younger brother. it was very fun.
Then I go to necklace making room. And I maked Angry Pig neklace. That was good, but my brother unmaked a Olaf.
That montain wasn't difficult, because there was flat so I didn't feel hard.

TEACHER'S CORRECTION:

I went to U-Myung montain. It was not bad, because there was many kind of plants and playground. I played with my younger brother. it was very fun.
Then I went to necklace making room. And I made Angry Pig neklace. That was good, but my brother didn't made an Olaf.
That montain wasn't difficult to climb, because it is flat so I didn't feel hard.

TEACHER'S EXPLANATION:

>We used Simple Past to express the idea that an action started and finished at a specific time in the past. Sometimes, the speaker may  not actually mention the specific time, but they do have one specific time in mind.

> The use of didn't is more correct compare to the use of "unmaked".

*** I am so happy Mark that you submitted your homework. I commend your sentences and it's construction. Continue to grow in English word! Keep going. T.BERNARD

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