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작성자 : ksy***   ·   2014-05-11

In next birthday, I want a wallet instead of flowers and cake.
And I want to have some real quality time with husband.

Which present do you want from your friend?

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On my next birthday, I want a wallet instead of flowers and cake. And I want to have some real quality time with my husband. What present do you like to receive from your friend?

Julie: In next birthday, I want a wallet instead of flowers and cake.
Correct: On my next birthday, I want a wallet instead of flowers and cake.
Explanation: When talking about "happenings", it's better to use prepostion "on".

Julie: And I want to have some real quality time with husband.
Correct: And I want to have some real quality time with my husband.
Explanation: Since the subject it talking about "real quality time with love one" use possessive pronoun "my".

Julie: Which present do you want from your friend?
Correct: What present do you like to receive from your friend?
Explanation: It's better to use interrogative pronoun "what" instead of "which". "Which" is used when you had given choices to the person you are talking to.

** Hello, Julie! :) Thank you once again for making this composition.Anyway, about the question, I'd like to receive any presents or gifts from my friend. Because no matter how cheap or expensive it is, I'll treasure it. Keep it up! Great job, Julie! ^_^


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