Wanda: I want home with yochan
Correct: I went home with Yochan.
Explanation: It is better to say I "went" because it already happened. Also you need to capitalize a word if its a Name, Days, Months, weeks, Country etc.

Wanda: so we follow them when we saw a horrify sight.
Correct: so we followed them when we saw a horrifying sight.
Explanation: If it's past tense it should be "followed". You were describing a word so it should be an adjective "horrifying"

Wanda: So when I was going to the piano class picked the flowers a lot and throw to the hall.
Correct: So when I went to the piano class I picked a lot of flowers and threw it to the hall.
Explanation: It is better to say it this way because the sentence is too fragmented. I rephrase the whole sentence to make it more understandable.

Wanda: The bird is so poor
Correct: The bird was so poor.
Explanation: you must use past tense.

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Wanda :)

Good Job! just be careful with the agreement of your subject and verb.

Teacher Jas