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작성자 : jes*** · 2014-04-30
I had learnt about pizza machine. I made my own pizza making keyboard and talked about it with my teacher. Also I told my teacher how to speak machine in korean. I made a speach about my machine and the title was of my machine was Fresh ice. And it was famous in Korea and my teacher's country. Monday class was very fun. I also like teacher Jasmine!!!!! Teacher Jasmine is my best teacher!!!!
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Gloria: speech
Correct: Speech
Explanation: Be careful with the spelling before you type it.
Gloria: the title was of my machine was Fresh ice.
Correct: the title was My machine has Fresh Ice.
Explanation: Please be mindful about subject verb agreement
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Hi Gloria :)
haha :D I had fun too. You're one of the best students that I have too :D.
Study hard and be mindful about my correction ^^
Love
Teacher Jasmine ^^