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My favorite food
작성자 : thd*** · 2014-04-28
My favorite food is iced noodles. Because It is very cool.
When I eat in summer it just summer is go. When I was eight years old.
I tried to eat iced noodles but It is not yummy.
When nine years old I tried one more time is cool and yummy. So, I eat all of noodles and soup.
Iced noodles soup is delicious. It's little sour too.
The iced noodles is little sour. It is more tasty.
I really like iced noodles. I love iced noodles
When I eat in summer it just summer is go. When I was eight years old.
I tried to eat iced noodles but It is not yummy.
When nine years old I tried one more time is cool and yummy. So, I eat all of noodles and soup.
Iced noodles soup is delicious. It's little sour too.
The iced noodles is little sour. It is more tasty.
I really like iced noodles. I love iced noodles
답변
Julia: When I eat in summer it just summer is go.
Correct: I eat in summer
Explanation: I rephrase the sentence to make it more understandable.
Julia: is cool and yummy
Correct: its cool and yummy
Explanation: It is better to say this way.
Julia: So, I eat all of noodles and soup.
Correct: So, I ate all of noodles and soup.
Explanation: If its past tense it should be ate.
Julia ^^
hehe... you really like food! I will try Jos dokbokkee the one that you recommended to me. at some time Let's eat together that Iced Noodles haha I want to taste it too. Anyways, Good job for today! Just be reminded with my corrections and study hard, take care and be happy :)
Lots of love,
Jasmine :D 