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작성자 : jes*** · 2014-04-27
My favourite movie is called FROZEN.
The chartacters are: Elsa, Anna, Hans, Olaf, Christoff.
The places are: ice palace, the castle, snowy mountain.
My favourite part of the movie was when Anna punched Hans into the water beacause it was very funny.
Olaf is very cute and have kindness, Anna likes adventures and cares for her big sister. Elsa is very lovely and has magic powers Hans is a bad prince and Chistoff has a nice heart.
The chartacters are: Elsa, Anna, Hans, Olaf, Christoff.
The places are: ice palace, the castle, snowy mountain.
My favourite part of the movie was when Anna punched Hans into the water beacause it was very funny.
Olaf is very cute and have kindness, Anna likes adventures and cares for her big sister. Elsa is very lovely and has magic powers Hans is a bad prince and Chistoff has a nice heart.
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Gloria: ice palace,
Correct: Ice Palace
Explanation: It should be capitalize.
Gloria: beacause
Correct: because
Gloria: Chartacters
Correct: Characters
Explanation: Please be careful with the spelling before you type :)
Gloria: Olaf is very cute and have kindness
Correct; Olaf is very cute and kind.
Explanation: It is better to say it in this way to make it more understandable.
Hi Gloria :D
Wow, I appreciate your effort to finished this homework! Good job just be careful with the spelling and capitalization and word rephrasing okay?
Take care and study hard Love lots from teacher Jas 
