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First homework

작성자 : jes***   ·   2014-04-27

My family and me like to watch TV, going on a holiday and
sleepin together.
Also we love homeschooling. Because, textbook we use at home are very
fun and I feel more comfortable than going to school.
We love anything that we can do together.

답변

My family and I like to watch TV, go on a holiday and sleep together. We also love homeschooling because the textbook we use at home are very fun and I feel more comfortable than going to school. We love anything that we can do together.

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1.
Christine: My family and me like to watch TV, going on a holiday and sleepin together.
Correct: My family and I like to watch TV, go on a holiday and sleep together.
Explanation:  Both I and me are pronouns that we use to refer to ourselves, but I is nominative, suitable for use as the subject of a sentence or clause, and me is accusative, suitable for use as the object of a verb. We should always make our sentences parallel with each other and consistent. When we start it with a present tense of the verb, all the verbs in the sentences should follow the same form too.

2.
Christine: Also we love homeschooling. Because, textbook we use at home are very fun and I feel more comfortable than going to school.
Correct: We also love homeschooling because the textbook we use at home are very fun and I feel more comfortable than going to school.
Explanation: "Also" is used in positive sentences to add an agreeing thought. With verbs other than "to be," "also" comes before single verb forms. Articles in our sentences are very important because they help give cohesion and makes our thoughts clear. When we are talking about one thing in particular, we use the.

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Hey Christine! Good job on your first homework! I am very proud of you because you were able to create sentences with so much thought and it makes sense. Keep studying about grammar and more vocabulary words so that you can improve well and you can express yourself better next time. I can't wait to know more about you, Christine! Keep it up! See you later~ Bye!

- T. Rose :)

 

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