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작성자 : gab***   ·   2014-04-24

Sharks are very dengerous because their eat our arm.
Octopuses are very dengerous because their tentacles are scary..
Jellyfishes are very dengerous because their have poison.

finish!!?

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Sharks are very dangerous because they can eat our arm.
Octopuses are very dangerous because their tentacles are scary.
Jellyfishes are very dangerous because they have poison.

======REMINDERS=======

* The correct spelling of DANGEROUS is with an "a" , not an "e".

** Do not confuse they, there, and their. Their is used to show possession. It is just like my, your, his, her, its, and our. They're is a shortened version of they are. (The apostrophe replaces the letter a.) Only use they're if you can substitute it with they are

=====NOTES=====

Hey Gabe! Wow~  I think those sea creatures are dangerous too. I don't like them either because they're all scary. Aigoo~ Well anyway, I hope you continue learning how to make sentences. So far, you only have a few errors. Continue studying hard. See you later~ Bye!

- T. Rose :)

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