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To teacher,Homework/Make a senans.

작성자 : mel***   ·   2014-04-23

to teacher.
1.chocoate/ I don't like a chocoate.
2.lollipops/ Lollipops are very sweet.
3.jelly beans/ I love rainbou jelly beans.
4.caramel/ I dont eat caramel.
form melissa.

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STUDENT'S HOMEWORK:

1.chocoate/ I don't like a chocoate.
2.lollipops/ Lollipops are very sweet.
3.jelly beans/ I love rainbou jelly beans.
4.caramel/ I dont eat caramel.

TEACHER'S CORRECTIONS:

1.chocolate/ I don't like a chocolate.
2.lollipops/ Lollipops are very sweet.
3.jelly beans/ I love rainbow jelly beans.
4.caramel/ I don't eat caramel.

TEACHER'S EXPLANATION:

> Melissa, like your sentences. The thought is there and  the point that the writer wants to address however, you need to be aware on your spelling. The readers ability to understand an article will also depends on the spelling the writer used. So next time double check your spelling. Anyhow, I commend your sentences. You can do better. T.BENRARD

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