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Homework/ Why do we need to keep our area clean?

작성자 : mel***   ·   2014-04-16

1. I like clean.
2. We don't clean the house is to diriy.

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STUDENT'S HOMEWORK :
1. I like clean.
2. We don't clean the house is to diriy.


TEACHER'S CORRECTION :
1. I to like clean.
2. We clean our house when it is dirty.


TEACHER'S EXPLANATION:
Sentence # 1: The infinitive form may sometimes be used as a noun, but the nuance is more of the abstract idea os the verb ("I like to clean") rather than something specific that someone would belooking forward to.
Sentence # 2 : We need to organize our sentence so that the  reader will not get confused on the real meaning and thought of the sentence.

TEACHER'S NOTE: Hello Melissa! I appreciate that you do your homework. But it will be better if you will try to use more effective sentence next time. Please read and review my correction. T.BERNARD

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