The rich man tried to do constant exertions in his entire life just to become rich and in his mind, poor people do not give enough effort. Although he has to know that it is only one side of an opinion but on the other hand, they are deprived from a lot of things like quality education, work opportunities, etc. It is also a burden for them to take care of several family members. Nobody wants to be poor.
    I am going to persuade the rich to share to others because that is the most pleasureable thing to do in life.


Hello Andrew,
Thank you for doing your homework.
You've done well by the way.
I understood it because you can express your idea very well.
We just have to brush up on your grammar.

Once again, thank you for doing your homework.
And have a great day ahead!

T. Melody