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What's your favorite holiday?

작성자 : mel***   ·   2014-03-27

1. My favorite holiday was chrismas
2. Beause daddy gave me a present.
3. I usuelly do making tree.

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STUDENT'S ASSIGNMENT:

1. My favorite holiday was chrismas
2. Beause daddy gave me a present.
3. I usuelly do making tree.

TEACHERS'S CORRECTION:

1. My favorite holiday is Christ mas
2. Because my daddy usually give me a present.
3. I decorate our Christmas tree.


TEACHER'S EXPLANATION:

1. The use of "is" and "was". We use "was" when  we pertaining to the past  tense of the event or the things. In your sentence it is different, because  the holiday Christmas is  not always a past  tense, for it is happening every year.

2. "Gave" is past tense also in your sentence. Almost the same explanation  in number 1. The things is repetitious because your daddy give those gifts t you yearly.

3.Instead of using "do" or "making", your sentence will become clearer if  you will use the appropriate verb to describe a subject.

TEACHER'S NOTE:

Thank You Melissa for doing assignment! I really feel that your favorite holidays is really the Christmas season. Thank You for sharing those ideas to me. But you need to be aware on your grammar too. Please review my corrections and try to apply it in your daily conversation if possible. Thank You. T. Bernard.  


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