I am a globe-trotter so I was also travelling to New york. Suddenly someone ripped my wallet off. I was so sad so I drop my parents a line to receive money and I hear from my parents, the letter said, I will send money. I was so happpy, 5 days later I was back.

Those word/s with this means I added some letters to make your sentence write.
Those word/s with this means I added a word that fit to your sentence.

Note: Read my corrections, and take note of the things I corrected. I put space on your words and put some punctuation marks. Please review. Thank you.

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Hello Emily ^^

Good Job in your homework. Keep it up!

Adjah!

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Teacher Mary ^^