Today is my friend birthday.
so I and my friends go to the Family-Restaurant "out back."
and I eat a chicken potatos and a chicken selad and soup.
and I and My friend go to the ice rink.
But I'm can't skate.¤Ð¤Ð
But My friend Eun-ji teaching me the skate.
so me skate is fun^.^
<my teacher Jessa>

 REVISED SENTENCES: "MY FRIEND'S BIRTHDAY"

Incorrect: Today is my friend birthday.
Correct: Today is my friend's birthday.
Explanation: You have to say "Friend's birthday", because it's singular. Please study the noun. (Singular and Plural Noun).

Incorrect:so I and my friends go to the Family-Restaurant "out back."
Correct: So, I and my friends family go to the restaurant.
Explanation: It should be friend's family, because you we're with your friends family.

Incorrect: I eat a chicken potatos and a chicken selad and soup.
Correct: I ate chicken potatoes,chicken salad and soup.
Explanation: Please study the tenses of the verbs, most specially the present and past tense. When the action is done, you have to change your verb into past tense form.

Incorrect: I and My friend go to the ice rink.
Correct:We went to the ice rink, but I don't know how to skate.
Explanation: Please study the tenses of the verbs, most specially the present and past tense. When the action is done, you have to change your verb into past tense form.

Incorrect:But My friend Eun-ji teaching me the skate.
Correct: My friend Eun-ji taught me how to skate.
Explanation: Please study the tenses of the verbs, most specially the present and past tense. When the action is done, you have to change your verb into past tense form.

Incorrect: so me skate is fun^.^
Correct: For me skating is very fun.
Explanation: Please add "for" because you are referring to yourself.

Hello there, Min ju:

I'm very happy that you wrote something about your friend's birthday party. I really appreciate your effort. Please take note of my corrections in your homework. It's my pleasure to correct your work. I'm very impressed because you are a very good example to other students. Thank you for your active participation in the class. Don't be shy okay?, because I am always ready to help you. Please keep up the good work!

Lots of love,

Teacher Jessa ^_^