I go to school at 8:00 o'clock. I study from 9 to 12:30. I eat lunch from 12:30 to 1:20. I study more from 1:20 to 3:55 and then, I come home.

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Bill: I study more from 1:20 to 3:55. And i come home.
Correct: I study more from 1:20 to 3:55 and then, I come home.
Explanation: Use the conjunction " and " to connect two different clauses. We usually use this in the middle of the sentence, not at the first part of the sentence. When you use the pronoun " I ", make sure that it is capitalized whether it is found in the first part of the sentence or not.

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Hi Bill! Wow~ you really have a busy daily schedule. I can see that you are very diligent when it comes to studying. Keep that up and you will excel in school. I will see you tomorrow, Bill! Thank you!

- T. Rose :)