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I will describe one of my friends

작성자 : jh0***   ·   2014-03-18

Hello~
I will describe one of my friends

Heejung and me are friends from the high school.
She has black curly hair.
And her hair is short.
Her eyes are big. she has double eyelids.
i think she is pretty.
She is slim. and she is shorter than me.
Her skin is very very white.
So you can find her easily

Good night Teacher =]

답변

Hello~
I will describe one of my friends

Heejung and I are friends from high school.
She has black curly hair.
Her hair is short.
Her eyes are big. She has double eyelids.
I think she is pretty.
She is slim and shorter than me.
Her skin is very very white.
So you can find her easily

Good night Teacher =]


Those word/s with this means I change it into pronoun.
Those word/s with this means I capitalize a word/s.

Note: Please try to check everything. I deleted some words to make your sentences better.


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Annyeong Judy ~~

Great Job again for this homework. Few corrections only :)
Keep it up! I believe in you ^^
Adjah!

 


Love lots,

Teacher Mary :)

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