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작성자 : hsj*** · 2014-03-17
One day,Gertrude and John Knight were working in their garden.
And they noticed that the cement frog was gone. Thety thought kids ripped
the frog off.but he changed his mind. He got a strange postcard from the
frog. the postcard said, I'm sick of sitting in your garden.Had to get
away. And he got a letter from New york.the frog said I'll back around the
christmas. For the eight mounths, he gots a letter from Indonesia,Sweden,and
Italy.finally,the frog dropped them a line from Japan,which said "I'll catch you later."And just before they christmas,the globd-trotting frog
arrive home.They don't have a clue who took the frog. but they sure
gota kck out of his adventure.
And they noticed that the cement frog was gone. Thety thought kids ripped
the frog off.but he changed his mind. He got a strange postcard from the
frog. the postcard said, I'm sick of sitting in your garden.Had to get
away. And he got a letter from New york.the frog said I'll back around the
christmas. For the eight mounths, he gots a letter from Indonesia,Sweden,and
Italy.finally,the frog dropped them a line from Japan,which said "I'll catch you later."And just before they christmas,the globd-trotting frog
arrive home.They don't have a clue who took the frog. but they sure
gota kck out of his adventure.
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One day,Gertrude and John Knight were working in their garden and they noticed that the cement frog was gone. They thought kids ripped the frog off, but he changed his mind. He got a strange postcard from the frog, the postcard said, I'm sick of sitting in your garden had to get away, and he got a letter from New York, the frog said I'll back around the Christmas. For the eight months, he got a letter from Indonesia,Sweden,and Italy. Finally,the frog dropped them a line from Japan,which said "I'll catch you later."And just before they the globe-trotting frog arrived home.They don't have a clue who took the frog. but they sure got a kick out of his adventure.
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Those word/s with this means I change the Spelling.
Those word/s with this means I change the one letter of the word to a small letter.
Those word/s with this means change the one letter of the word to a big letter.
Those word/s with this means I changed the verb.
Those word/s with this means I added a letter to the verb.
Note: Please Try to review all my corrections, especially your spacing and capitalization of some words.
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Hello Emily ^^
I am so happy because you did your homework. It's a great job, you did it well. Keep up the Good work and continue being good in class. Okay. I believe in you.
Adjah!
Love--
Teacher Mary :)